dynomite716's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bloody Tears (Master Mix)]

great

in the beginning sort of i heard a sharp note tht did not fit in. nice guitar entrance. i lied it at 2:10 with intense guitars. nice features with background and drums except the multiple splash cymbal (small cymbal with short reverberation) the hi hat at the beginning was unnesecary (i dont know how to spell tht) anyway keep it up with the great ( i dont say great often consider your self musically talented) work

natasha-the-cat responds:

well I agree with you on the unnecessary hi hat but I put that there so that the volume control didn't glitch and make the whole song quiet.

thank you for the review It helped ^-^

[sun sketch]

be more creative

the song loops too many times your just overusing all the melodys. and the drums gave me a headache. the transitions of the guitar and piano were not to great either. be more creative think how long this song took you and how long you should hav taken to revise this song. listen to it 2 or three times before submiting it to see if you messed up. i hope this contributes to your work. just practice.

Ch3ck3rB0ard responds:

=( this makes me sad i did work hard on this and i wrote it for a friend but thanks for ..erm.... listening and writing a "honest" review about it

[Mirror You]

this is trance

video game songs hav a full melody 90 % of he time this song song has more background themes. is enjoyable to som people but theres still more that could be built on to it. maybe it could be used but i still want a little mor. nice job though.

[3_2_1!]

you used loops :(

i know those loops i have garageband too i dont like people who use the loops it shows no creativity. my songs dont have loops

flamdod responds:

yea i know:|
I made it like a long time ago, at school.
be for i got my own computer,
I know its not the best, but I just thought I should Submit it to see what people thought.
thanks 4 reviewing:)

[AGO GO GO!]

good job

have you ever think to add another beat or something to make it more tense or have just 5 beats all at the same time. it says i am f-ing EPIC and sort of intense or something.... but thats kind of my opinion u did good though. :P

Randomizor responds:

Haha ya

[Heavy_Rock]

good fix up

u put it up well. u have a good sense for music. just make sure you put up better notes than some of them. maybe spend a little more time on the melody. add a bass line or some backround and make a song out of this a little repetative but hey we learn . move the tempo up maybe a pinch too. any way good job. this is just a way so i can slightly help.......... :P hav a fun time while your making music too.... ^o^

triniground responds:

thx

[somthing for the future]

you need to grow up and think better

its the same thing over an over. u might of thought that sound was cool but its annoying the beats are sort good at SOME parts but its scratchy and i just dont thing its worthy of being called music yet. right know its unfinished stuff that people just dont want want to hear and your spacing for the effects was off time making it horrible. please make things less annoying and repetative please. youll go places in music if u listen to what i say. most likely...

[[Brawl 8-Bit] Green Greens]

great song

you hit all the note basically so good job but find ways to improve quality. what do u use to create music?

loogiesquared responds:

MS Paint, MS Street and Tips and---... j/k
i use FL (demo.)

[My People Distorted]

great job

u can make scratchy songs that sound good and bad this one is higher than good

Smidly responds:

Oh thank you. Scratchy? Do you mean distorted?

[[VN]-Taking The Chance]

scratchy and reversed

not best 4 most listeners really scratchy experimenting or not at least try to keep quality dont rush just dont make it switch ears unevenly it was a bad experience for my ears most of it not all of it

VNStudios responds:

Well thanks for the review. Reviews like yours really do help us improve. I'll take your advice in our next song.