dynomite716's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nervousness]

yes not very impressive

you have a talent and i want you to explore this talent with a more melodic approach to music. this sounds great as a background. add a melody as a excitement in an edited version or if u would like i could finish it off for you. it can keep its title and just be a revised version with credits to you. otherwise continue the great work.
just p.m. me if you would like me to finish it.

theta4 responds:

No, but thanks for the offer. I like it just the way it is.

This song is more for a background purpose. I never intended this song to have anything groundbreaking melody-wise. I made it just to provide a sort of atmosphere or something. I don't plan on changing anything.

Of course the license does say that you can download this and make your own music with it. It says next to the download button: "Share Alike: If you alter, transform, or build upon this music, you may distribute the resulting creation only under a license identical to this one."

If you want to get started, the song is 120bpm, with A as the base note. If you do decide to build upon my music, please PM me when you're done. I'd really like to hear what you come up with!

--alex

[[LiQ] DeJa-Up]

holy crap

great job. i dont give serious 10's often but something this damn good deserves it. my favorite part is that you had the patience to master and remaster it use alot of instruments and still have decent or great work. continue the great work

liqourish responds:

YES!!! i came out with like 30+ revisions and keep redoing it lawoL. tanks fer noticing!

[Nuthin' but drums 3]

hmm

i dont care if is called nothin but drums this could use a melody and create a great song. if this took you less than 1 hour you obviously do not understand the complexity of music and its way of speaking. work on a melody and become a big shot after a couple of more melodic submisions. not ment to insult ment to help sorry if i was in any way hurt full oh well keep cracking at it

WizzardRabbit responds:

I have made a melodic remix for my rebuttal. Enjoy, I hope. I only have half a years experience.

[Forbidden Interest]

hmmm

the best part is at 0:50 and it repeats alot and only has any good parts near the the end

NativeNiles responds:

Good to Know, thx for comment.

[Hawk - Juan Rico - Drum N Bass]

srry but you used loops

when you use loops the highest rating i give is a three you got a two. stop using loops. check out my music i used garage band on mac and the only one using loops is graffiti learn to produce without loops

['Another Place']

Holy S***

nice i hate ambient yet this is a good song nice work. not up to most peoples taste but if everybody equally like each genre of music this would be a great song and o good hit. keep up all great work yes this whole comment was supposed 2 be a compliment

[Pulchritudinous]

great melody

very capturing catchy consious if other backrounds otherwise eveything fits in ok enough with the c's now you know where to put every thing and hav great drums in the proccess. more of a video game or trance and it has a good length for its theme
great job
P.s. i downloaded it

p.p.s. the p.s. was unecessary

[PandoraTranquil- The Departing]

great job

nice job you had everything perfectly fitting in and it yes had good backgrounds i give it 9.5 which is my highest ranking ever given when being serious :) so keep up the great job and bad comments now. in my opinion if u make the slow beginning long i expect the whole song to be long too. thats just how i like it im patient but if i dont get a reward for listening to the whole beginning well its just a pity. great job any way its just my opinion and u r a better music artist than i am at the moment so keep up the great (3rd great 4th great 5th...) job

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

I am very happy to hear that. Especially if you were listening critically.

I agree with you :-( I should have lengthened it to about 4 minutes and made a second climax. I might do that for the final version if I ever get around to it, but either way, thank you for listening to the whole thing, and I am glad you felt it deserved such a high score. :-)

[Felix Battle (GS LA)]

goodor great read this and find out

hmm its not quiet it has percussion it has a melody backgrounds drum set and a odd way of making people say yay!!! now the bad parts. my yay!! scared my dog and a little short for a song like this. story line are always appreciatedto show u care about entertainment. storylines would fit good in this song. great job

[Thoughtful Piano]

hmmm

now add other instruments and ill give you a 9 or a 10. theres nothing else bad tht i can point out so really just keep up the work. maybe you could add in other textured pianos and a conga or somthing. some bass could go great with the melody. good job

ShinyArmor responds:

i was thinking of orchestral like drums but i'll probably do that later, originally i wanted to make it just a piano song. but i guess adding stuff wont hurt.