dynomite716's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nuthin' but drums 3]

hmm

i dont care if is called nothin but drums this could use a melody and create a great song. if this took you less than 1 hour you obviously do not understand the complexity of music and its way of speaking. work on a melody and become a big shot after a couple of more melodic submisions. not ment to insult ment to help sorry if i was in any way hurt full oh well keep cracking at it

WizzardRabbit responds:

I have made a melodic remix for my rebuttal. Enjoy, I hope. I only have half a years experience.

[Forbidden Interest]

hmmm

the best part is at 0:50 and it repeats alot and only has any good parts near the the end

NativeNiles responds:

Good to Know, thx for comment.

[PandoraTranquil- The Departing]

great job

nice job you had everything perfectly fitting in and it yes had good backgrounds i give it 9.5 which is my highest ranking ever given when being serious :) so keep up the great job and bad comments now. in my opinion if u make the slow beginning long i expect the whole song to be long too. thats just how i like it im patient but if i dont get a reward for listening to the whole beginning well its just a pity. great job any way its just my opinion and u r a better music artist than i am at the moment so keep up the great (3rd great 4th great 5th...) job

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

I am very happy to hear that. Especially if you were listening critically.

I agree with you :-( I should have lengthened it to about 4 minutes and made a second climax. I might do that for the final version if I ever get around to it, but either way, thank you for listening to the whole thing, and I am glad you felt it deserved such a high score. :-)

[Thoughtful Piano]

hmmm

now add other instruments and ill give you a 9 or a 10. theres nothing else bad tht i can point out so really just keep up the work. maybe you could add in other textured pianos and a conga or somthing. some bass could go great with the melody. good job

ShinyArmor responds:

i was thinking of orchestral like drums but i'll probably do that later, originally i wanted to make it just a piano song. but i guess adding stuff wont hurt.

[Bloody Tears (Master Mix)]

great

in the beginning sort of i heard a sharp note tht did not fit in. nice guitar entrance. i lied it at 2:10 with intense guitars. nice features with background and drums except the multiple splash cymbal (small cymbal with short reverberation) the hi hat at the beginning was unnesecary (i dont know how to spell tht) anyway keep it up with the great ( i dont say great often consider your self musically talented) work

natasha-the-cat responds:

well I agree with you on the unnecessary hi hat but I put that there so that the volume control didn't glitch and make the whole song quiet.

thank you for the review It helped ^-^

[sun sketch]

be more creative

the song loops too many times your just overusing all the melodys. and the drums gave me a headache. the transitions of the guitar and piano were not to great either. be more creative think how long this song took you and how long you should hav taken to revise this song. listen to it 2 or three times before submiting it to see if you messed up. i hope this contributes to your work. just practice.

Ch3ck3rB0ard responds:

=( this makes me sad i did work hard on this and i wrote it for a friend but thanks for ..erm.... listening and writing a "honest" review about it

[3_2_1!]

you used loops :(

i know those loops i have garageband too i dont like people who use the loops it shows no creativity. my songs dont have loops

flamdod responds:

yea i know:|
I made it like a long time ago, at school.
be for i got my own computer,
I know its not the best, but I just thought I should Submit it to see what people thought.
thanks 4 reviewing:)

[AGO GO GO!]

good job

have you ever think to add another beat or something to make it more tense or have just 5 beats all at the same time. it says i am f-ing EPIC and sort of intense or something.... but thats kind of my opinion u did good though. :P

Randomizor responds:

Haha ya

[Heavy_Rock]

good fix up

u put it up well. u have a good sense for music. just make sure you put up better notes than some of them. maybe spend a little more time on the melody. add a bass line or some backround and make a song out of this a little repetative but hey we learn . move the tempo up maybe a pinch too. any way good job. this is just a way so i can slightly help.......... :P hav a fun time while your making music too.... ^o^

triniground responds:

thx

[[Brawl 8-Bit] Green Greens]

great song

you hit all the note basically so good job but find ways to improve quality. what do u use to create music?

loogiesquared responds:

MS Paint, MS Street and Tips and---... j/k
i use FL (demo.)