Gr8 work man...... its short and a loop but it still is gr* work done but not the best ever so u get a 9 for 2day
You may think this is harsh but ill do a break down the begining drums areoff a little the whole song lacks the stable amount of backgrounds at 2:50 the trance is completly wrong. it makes no melody it would best be put down lower in volume and used as a background
No offense taken. Thanks for the comment :D
yes better revise. definitly. greater. still has a faded or not full beginning but i can hear the new bass synth and it sounds great. nice job and know comes the hard part. making a new song with all the good things on your First try. look forward to hearing more
Thanks man. Thanks for the feedback. Could be a while until I get anything worth while up. Baseball season starts Monday and takes up the majority of my week but I'll try. Just want to introduce you to some of my friends work... EricTheMan... Look him up. Some of his shiz is legit. Thanks again for the review.
i like it too
the music definitly shows great potential but really repetative and and the didgeridoos do soung good for the music
very great i dont know if this is yours or u remixed the song and id enjoy it if u put remix somewhere. those were the cons and the pro are everything was in place the change in melody and drums at the right time made itgreat and the backrounds made it emphasized just enough. i enjoyed 3:30 great melody/solo. great work keep it up
Thanks Dynomite, glad u like it. The solo is just a blues progression and just played it on the offchance it would sound ok.
no i dont enjoy the transition much either and the melody hits some flat notes not worth to be in there and the drums could use more than just one type of crash. and a melody needs to change tones in a song or it can be called short. if the drums dont change enough i call u lazy and right now i call u lazy in no offense. Fl 8 offers so much with its distortions and noise fixers 3x osc i think its called. but if your experimenting good job if the this is a 20th song from fl 8 than this is not worth the time. any way think about this and i look forward to hearing other songs
hey thanks dude I totally agree with ha literally everything you said. This is my third song and I was messing around with melody ideas is all. Depending on the feedback such as yours I was going to add to it. I for sure am now. I'm gonna fix up the transitions and incorporate some different synths and toss in some effects. This was really just a demo. But thanks a bunch man. Means a lot.
the sparkly thing is actually taking away from the effect and it sounds like some off keys r hit on the piano. not wat i would call great work but nice try. im at 2:13 and the sparkly is really anoying and mak it go away :'( juat keep trying and listen 2 your music 3 times or so for revisions each time focusing on somthin different each listen and try to limit som ringing please. keep working
I didnt expect people to like it that much. Sort of experimental. anyways, thanks for advice.
great organization. uhhh theres not much i can complain about so keep up the reat work and uhhh... ok and uhh yeah.
Uhhhh, umm thanks, umm for the umm review, uhh....
Just jk, but seriously, I would have liked to hear any complaints you had with the piece. I don't mind criticism.
MAKE THIS A SONG!!! this ends 2 quickly if you want it 2 stay short make it a little bigger but this would also be a great opening for a song or a open middle part of song. anyway it was great an keep up the great work
Yeah dude! I am actually going to make this into an entire song in a couple of days!
Thanks for review!
Dj Roc A Lot
nice remixing and fitting in the lyrics
Thanks, i don't care about this song so much since it was just a test i should try. But thanks anyway =D
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